rains pelting on
window sill-
memories fade
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fresh snow
under the window-
fresh memories
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in a drab day
footprints
mark my existence
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touching those
colours which
swirl in memory
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trying to write
short verses-
a pilgrimage?
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Problems with my PC. Posting from work. Will get back to your blogs as soon as possible.
27 comments:
I've heard that brevity is next to godliness.
tami, these are evocative and nicely connected images. I really like how the piece becomes an emotional pilgrimage at the end.
Lovely. And I liked the humour in the last.
I like the subtle connection between these. And the footprints....sometimes a comfort to leave them or find them and know we share this pilgrimage....
Good luck with the computer!
Love the unfolding of these lined little gems. And the rain/memory is very moving.
'fresh snow
under the window-
fresh memories'
My favorite one. We just had a heavy snowfall all day yesterday. Made getting into work this morning rather an adventure...
sorry about your PC problems.. Here's an attempt on your theme:
breakers crash
footprints in the sand
wash away
Very nice....I enjoyed them all!
Especially...
fresh snow
under the window-
fresh memories
Margie
Good as always. :D
Writing poetry IS like a pilgrimage, isn't it?
I like these!
excellent - footprints are sometimes all we have!
Nice assembly of lines-
I prefer shot verses, so I am no judge. Yours are good to me.
Oh wow! I got to try this pilgrimage ...
"trying to write
short verses-
a pilgrimage?"
short verses as a pilgrimage. never thought of that!
Love your short verses
I wrote this one for you too...
Hope you like it, phew!
Brief and welcome verse!
Chuckling at your dash of humor (or insight?)
you did it! no matter the adversity, you got something up! and they work individually and connected!
Aha !! wat imagery :)
Happy Wednesday! Bloghoppin' here... Hey, I have an interesting tutorial for you that I have written myself. It is about adding Adsense on your Single Post in XML template. I hope you'll like it! God Bless you!
love the openness [is there such a word?] of short verses... was just thinking abt that a few days ago...
Cool write gauthami!!
something different from your usual style....
So many facets of memory here. I like the loose connections.
my favorite's the first one, though the others are just as good, isn't everything a pilgrimage anyway?
ah lovely haikus!
u got a renga going here. linked poems.
Sanjay
ya have checked this out....really nice...if u dont mind could you tell me more about Haiku style of poetry.....
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