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| Supermoon 2013, Julio Cortez, AP |
after climbing that summit
it is impossible to descend
but the voices are asking me to risk it
I might give in to pressure
nothing happens without any smoke
I do not scare easily from the demons within my head
even if my belly heaves with tension
"I will carry that torch for you
many Supermoons may come and go"
33 comments:
Beautiful
Oh wow I love it =)
have a nice Sunday
much love...
Love it!
Mental
Oh so nicely done. Demon and the wordle! Beautiful message in your writing.
Beautiful poem, Gautami.
Pamela
So beautiful, Guatami!
Beautiful! I love it!
How well the picture and the poem compliment each other. Then the play of the demons within the head implying the viewers was a masterstroke.
Very well written, and I enjoyed it greatly.
Torch carrying is always worth the effort...
Nice words and an interesting photo.
The moon as a Jacobs ladder ..... Yeah
Nice one! I especially liked the last two lines...very thoughtful!:)
Thank you for visiting my blog and your comment ... I must say your poem is lovely, especially the closing lines as others have said. Have a great week!
Nothing happens without any smoke...I love that...
Great final lines!
Everyone loves a courageous torch-carrier.
=)
Dare to climb the summit is right!
pretty darn high! thanks.
the courage of women is gathered here in your poem.
A very interesting poem, I still have to climb to the summit!
Bravery and courage and integrity . Nice !
And since, countless moons that she has lived...
Love the angle you come at this from.
Very ethereal :) Deep.
Very nice....pushing through to greatness.
A most lovely read, and inspiring depths!
One should always carry a torch of hope..climb that mountain the best they can.
so nice ... the torch is such a powerful symbol ...
Very well done. Powerful poem with good imagery.
This is absolutely breathtaking. I'm so glad you visited my blog site at Constant Thoughts, so I could have a chance to read your poetry. Very touching, just the 3 I have gotten to so far. BTW: I can understand the spam thing. It is so annoying and difficult.
Nothing happens without any smoke - isn't that ever so true. We always risk something to achieve. Nice one.
Dropping by from OSI
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I will carry that torch for you
many Supermoons may come and go
Love that. Gorgeous picture, too.
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