artwork by Jeanie Tomanek |
I feel the freedom of our feathery friends
look at the bird so close to me
I think it wants to chat
in that wet heat
I feel the inky wind on my hair
in the leafless branches I see tiny shoots
it sparks new hope that life will never be lost in the mist
nature has well oiled itself to last forever
I will gather scarlet flowers to make another anklet
that elephant will break my fall from dropping into a hole
"in the grey of our lives,
we will always find red and maybe some yellow too.
I want it all in each and every hue"
21 comments:
Lovely images.
something like wanting to fly. i loved the images you create.
Such a love of life in this poem with all the colors! Beautiful!
very colorful, poetical...great take on both promts
A fine interpretation of the image.
...very lovely and your poem provides a familiar scene that really touches deep inside... beautiful & those written in italics are just captivating... loved this... smiles...
Delightfully engaging...
What a delightful poem about the beauty of nature.
nature has well oiled itself to last forever
Or so we hope...
Beautiful.. lyrical!
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aaah there's a villain too- the word captcha
I like how you spun this, I saw the many hues of life as well!
... the anklet, the elephant you saw ~~ A beautiful write.
Wonderfully nonsensical. I love the imagery and the carefree playfulness. Thank you for sharing.
Sweet.
ZQ
Beautifully written.
Here's to a colourful life...
Wonderful images!
It takes faith to drop on an elephant. But we must.
This is a beautiful poem full of hope and wisdom. I really enjoyed it.
I really really like this! Very serene
beautiful indeed......thanks again for sharing
There are many Hawks where I live..my favorite thing to do is fly with them in a Golden Spiral..the FREEDOM IS...
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