Sunday, May 04, 2014

circled aura


clipping my wings
you have nailed me to the wall
those serving spoons have more life

crucified, you might think
I will be worshipped for my eyes
I wish to break free like a blackbird

broken yet with an aura
I savour the moment of standing tall
see that glow on my facade

moonless night has no light...
you cannot see me play dead
a pretension of sorts

I promise I will arise from that ghastly wall
that aura will follow me around

15 comments:

Kathe W. said...

nicely done!

Sabra Bowers said...

You have done a great job of using the wordle words to describe the photo. You are a great weaver.

ScottlB said...

Good job

brudberg said...

to be nailed like that.. to be still with wings on display.. that's so often we do so with free spirits..

Jinksy said...

I savour the moment of standing tall

That's the way to do it! :-)

ZQ said...

:-)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Eventually one does rise from the wall and break free.......

Belva Rae Staples said...

Nice work! I believe you have a lovely aura.

Laurie Kolp said...

Wonderful combination of the prompts!

Sumana Roy said...

a wonderful translation of the image
Gautami..love the message..brilliant
... :)

vivinfrance said...

How cleverly you have combine the wordle with the magpie prompt. Not easy to do.

brenda w said...

Strong work!

21 Wits said...

Oh yes, such positive strength rings through!

keiths ramblings said...

A powerful message. Excellent as ever

Anonymous said...

This is lovely! Brilliantly written!