that spacecraft is waitingplanets are aligned
let me tread slowly into space
but first I must tangle with you
call me a lunatic or a loser if you must
you are aware I have to spread my wings
one of my endeavors to explore the beyond
leaving behind my very own angel
I am forever spinning into dreams
whatever you say, I won't sway
I will come back someday
born on a Christmas day
"that crowd is akin to shroud
I wish for silence to be loud"
22 comments:
Doubt is the biggest monster to fight...such a powerful piece..a quiet but strong cry of intention
Seems the word "lunatic" is on the loose today.I like the quote at the end.
A goodbye shrouded in desires to return. I like it.
It is indeed a positive thing when silence is the loudest sound.
Beautifully expressed, Gautami :)
I love that title... and I could feel the parting in your words..
Beautiful writing, and it makes one want the back story of the poem. Smiles.
Goodbyes are sad...I have read lots about angels and wings today
Silence certainly can be very loud. Delightful.
love this tangle of lovely words
well done!
ZQ
what a lovely poem!
"that crowd is akin to shroud
I wish for silence to be loud"
These beautifully woven lines stole my heart!! lovely!
That is so beautifully written.
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How we have both embraced and spurned that traveler as well absorbed and spurned the messages given to us. Let's hope the real lesson taught us doesn't lessen.
You've beautifully captured the feeling of longing in your words.
"let me tread slowly into space
but first I must tangle with you" - My favourite lines.
goodbyes are never easy, yet you "shroud" your goodbye in a "tangle" of returning, a crafty write
have a good week
much love...
Fly me too the moon...
It's interesting to see everyone's takes on the prompt. I've seen a couple of angels and references to space. I like seeing where people take the picture.
Brilliant.. Liked the flow and words...
They remind me of the opening scene drom " team america "
The rhythm and use of the words are quite lovely. The anxiety of parting and surety of return are well conveyed.
Beautiful poems as always Gautami!
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