Tuesday, November 08, 2005

Day and night


Day and night
two sides of life.
Day refreshes,
night rejuvenates

I drink on life
in the brightness
of the day.
And ponder over it
in the darkness
of the night

8 comments:

Fauzan said...

I drink on life
in the brightness
of the day.
And ponder over it
in the darkness
of the night


There is something so haunting and mysterious about this part. Can't put a finger on it but I like it!

Muchos Gracias for your comments :) I took the liberty to adding you to my "Watched Blogs" list. Hope it's all cool with you. Keep up the good work.

Deb said...

I feel this one...I live my life and then sit up all night reliving it. Trying to figure out what I could have done better.

Just A Human said...

Applause !

The best line was -
"I drink on life in the brightness of the day." - Awesome....

gautami tripathy said...

Thanks fauzan. It was spur of a moment writing!

No I don't mind you adding me to your Watched list!

Deb: Thanks for relating to it. But learning from our mistakes is what life is all about.

just a human: Thanks for the applause.

Blue Athena said...

Nice, Gautami!

I like the positive 'use' [damn, don't like this word] of both the day and night...

May you stay high on life. :)

Φ said...

xcellent imagery..am moved

gautami tripathy said...

Thanks Preeti.

Why do we always think of Day as positive and night nagative? Hence I wrote this in a positive note for both. I feel that way.

gautami tripathy said...

Φ , Thanx. Just plain simple verse!