Tuesday, November 08, 2005

Day and night


Day and night
two sides of life.
Day refreshes,
night rejuvenates

I drink on life
in the brightness
of the day.
And ponder over it
in the darkness
of the night

6 comments:

Just A Human said...

Applause !

The best line was -
"I drink on life in the brightness of the day." - Awesome....

gautami tripathy said...

Thanks fauzan. It was spur of a moment writing!

No I don't mind you adding me to your Watched list!

Deb: Thanks for relating to it. But learning from our mistakes is what life is all about.

just a human: Thanks for the applause.

Blue Athena said...

Nice, Gautami!

I like the positive 'use' [damn, don't like this word] of both the day and night...

May you stay high on life. :)

Φ said...

xcellent imagery..am moved

gautami tripathy said...

Thanks Preeti.

Why do we always think of Day as positive and night nagative? Hence I wrote this in a positive note for both. I feel that way.

gautami tripathy said...

Φ , Thanx. Just plain simple verse!