Thursday, September 04, 2008

blown away

the air around me has changed
uncertainity seems to have gone
the wind blew it away, leaving
behind a sense of tranquility;
when the clouded cobwebs cleared
all by themselves.
reading between the signs
I have this gut feeling that
it is time to leave the familiar,
venture out in the unknown
where whole of me would merge
with you, and why not?

"you and only you are home"

19 comments:

Art and Poetry said...

Very nice I like the clouded cobwebs line!

Greyscale Territory said...

Love the touch of romance emerging from untangling of threads! Lovely sense of hope.

anthonynorth said...

A crackling sense of expectation to this.
Nicely done.

Lenore said...

very lovely...I like the delicate and vunerable wistfulness about it.

Leila said...

I love seeing people who express themselves like I do, in a kind of poetry. I'm sure I used to follow your blog, years ago, but I am glad to hve found it again!

Steve said...

This one iy very good Gautami very good indeed!

Beloved Dreamer said...

Lovely Tami. Another love poem I think? Although one could add that the lover might be self. Well done


love,Melanie

Deborah Godin said...

A lovely poem, and one that could be read several times, each one being about merging with a different "you" - another person, the self, or God

Paul Maurice Martin said...

Love windy days and think you use the wind successfully here as a metaphor for change.

Have you read Shelley's "Ode to the West Wind"?

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

Another strong one, Gautami. I love the romance in it.

tumblewords said...

Love this - it has a magical quality!

Annamari said...

"uncertainity seems to have gone
the wind blew it away, leaving
behind a sense of tranquility;"
I love this.

It gives a new sense to being rooted.

Sweet Talking Guy.. said...

Hi Gautami, It's always good when uncertainty leaves but there again venturing out into the unknown could be a great adventure too..

Stan Ski said...

We can spend too long in one place, and perhaps be the cause of the contempt from familiarity of it. Escaping doesn't just mean running away - we all have discoveries to make.

sage said...

Nice, I love the wind and like how you tie it to romance and hope

Donnnnn said...

I cannot resist the sudden urge to quote Neil Young;

"You are like a hurricane,
There's calm in your eye.
And I'm gettin' blown away,
To somewhere safer where the feeling stays...
I want to love you but I'm getting,
blown away."

dee dee dee
dee-dee-dee
dee
dee
dee dee-dee dee-dee

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

wonderful work!

maekitso said...

Ah yes. There is a significant difference between surviving and living.

Ghost Particle said...

:)

alot of memories of going away, and alot of memories of finding a new life.