Monday, June 20, 2011

fruits dance on the walls

picture credit: Chris Galford














in a blind alley
I find fruits
dancing with each other
drinking their health
butterfly steps out
when bees sting
I write graffiti
on walls

"do knock it down"

20 comments:

A Daft Scots Lass said...

Very jolly.

dustus said...

Concise and revealing. Much life in your short poem—from revelry to birds and bees.

upinthecosmos said...

I love the picture and I think we can all learn from those fruits and veggies getting along:-)

Whitesnake said...

It does have punch!

Henry Clemmons said...

I like it. Short n to the point. Colorful and entertaining.

http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/my-andela.html

Jingle said...

glad to see fruits dance,
Cheers.

well done,

Fiducia said...

Shows oneness even in fruits and veggies....colorful...artistic...and powerful theme!

Laurie Kolp said...

Yummy and begging for more...

Nara Malone said...

I'd like to find fruit in a blind alley :)

beccagivens said...

Oh how fun!! :-)

mindlovemisery said...

I love "Blind alley" this is a lovely slice of life poem beautifully done

imnotaverse said...

Something a little different for you, I think. Nicely done.

pr910 said...

very nice, fun, and imaginative! made me cheered....!

magiceye said...

fruit punch!!
lovely!!

Jingle Poetry said...

pleasant one.

Jingle Poetry said...

Jingle appreciates your support to our poetry potluck.
Our week 41 Theme is: Saints, Monks, and Meditations,
Yet, old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome… ;)
Always, your poetry is sunshine to us!
Looking forward to seeing U on Sunday, 8pm or later.
Stay Blessed,
Love and hugs.
xoxox

patcegan said...

Charming poem...brought a smile to me. Like your live visitors feed, too. I had never seen that before. Hugs, pat

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

very delightful poem!!

Rek said...

Enjoyable and fun...

swapnap said...

title made me smile, but you always have let your words talk. Good one.