is that all there is-
left of your psychedelic underwear?
it did help in taking my mind off
from the seven deadly sins
finally when I see you give those up-
dear, dear John,
I am no longer interested in you
hope you quench your thirst
by visions of the future
lolling in the company of
saints, monks, and meditation
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I had fun writing this. I simply let go of myself and ended up with a poem which might not make much sense. But so what?
21 comments:
As creative a Dear John poem as I've seen.
=)
Sometimes our mind takes flight and leads us to assemble words that seem meaningless, but contain truth.
Outstanding Job !
I always look forward to the very talented poets among us and you never disappoint..."Outside of the box" use of the prompt yet so very "IN"... Bravo !
I like the idea of don juan lolling with the saints. such a good word, lolling.
extraordinary.
extraordinary.
I really admire poets, because I cannot write it, except for silly Roses are Red types that my husband and I make up to be silly! Great job!
so what indeed
as the moment takes us
a good sentiment
Dear Guatami: Being a flower-child of the 60's and 70's I can relate to the "psychelic underwear". I know exactly what you mean oddly enough!
OMG! My brothers wore psychedelic underwear. This is precious and a darned good send-off!
Namaste..........
This was different - I like - you certainly had fun - like a psychedelic swirl..jae
Yes, yes! Very chortleworthy.
..and so what it is...you ended up with great stuff!
Quite a different take on the prompt...love it!! Peace and blessings
Very very creative this one!
Very creative imagery. Well done.
Journey of Don Juan from psychedelic underwear to chanting saints...that's quite an interesting response to a Poetry Potlucj prompt. :-)
This is very amusing and cute =)
John Lennon, John the Baptist and Pope John all kinda wandered here for me! While Don Juan seemed to umpire the whole shebang! What a fun party!
Caught me off guard as a "dear John" letter ... fun and creative take on the prompt ... :-)
Holy moly! This is the most incredibly creative use of this prompt. I always look forward to your offerings...you have such a unique muse and I am always fascinated by it!
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