Monday, June 27, 2011

radiating rays

I expect you to walk out
towards light
radiating rays go outwards
never to converge
I watch acrid summer
paving a way for you

"come walk out from that photo"

19 comments:

Ana said...

it's strong end "acrid summer/pavid a way for you". Like :)

Monkey Man said...

Quite a longing within this 160. Thanks for playing.

Jingle said...

beautiful.

bless your Sunday.

Tess Kincaid said...

I love "acrid summer".

cosmos cami said...

Such beautiful words!
I love how you heap them all together!

hull of a city said...

evocative imagery

chiccoreal said...

Dear Guatami: Yes this is deep! Will try to be more 3d!

I watch acrid summer
paving a way for you

Sensing being part of a dimension shift soon to be what with the flat aspect of past personae stamped out and all. As you recreate from the abundant light a radiating dimensional 360 turn it around. Totally onto this!

Celestial Dreamz said...

acrid summer ... paving a way for you .... very beautiful.

mindlovemisery said...

"Acrid summer" is fabulous deep and powerful poem

vivienne blake said...

WoW - a true slice of observational thought. Bravo.

brenda w said...

Beautiful image, filled with yearning. I love this piece.

Elizabeth said...

Love the light touch of words that go so deep and say so much. As usual, you have created a profound statement with seeming ease.This is beautiful Gautami,

Elizabeth

Joseph Harker said...

Like everyone's saying, that last image of summer paving the way is killer. Short and sweet!

margoroby said...

The whole poem moves. Well done.

flaubert said...

Succinct piece of observation, Gautami.

Pamela

Wayne Pitchko said...

everyone has said it all....thnaks for this Gautami

Tumblewords: said...

Great capture!

Jinksy said...

Walking towards the light sounds good to me. ♥

Shauna said...

a beautiful spiritual touch to this poem.