Sunday, December 18, 2011

citizen of dreamland

I circled the purple
a game I played
as luck would have it
I had no trouble winning
my dream allow me to be flexible
I become a citizen of one the states of dreamland
far beyond earth, earth year
I don't lag behind
as I now fly wingless
no friction to curtail me

"happenstance?"

22 comments:

flaubert said...

Nice, Gautami. Concise and pretty.

Pamela

zongrik said...

circle the purple, that's an interesting game, could be taken many ways.

Marianne said...

Love your title and I like the idea of flying wingless!

Laurie Kolp said...

Love the title... a great piece!

Sheila Moore said...

no friction to curtail me - I like that!

turtlememoir said...

a citizen of dreamland - I like it, and the idea of flying wingless...

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Awesome! Fly free!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love "citizen of dreamland"...lovely.

brenda w said...

No friction, indeed! Abstract and playful.

lynnaima said...

happenstance in dream land, yes possible and true :)
happy gooseberry day!

http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/19/in-the-silence/

Kay L. Davies said...

Lovely! Flying wingless does sound wonderful.

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel

:-Dee said...

'Citizen of dreamland' - I am one too!!! This was a good read.. and so fresh!!! :)

Bar None Publishing Group said...

At this time of year we are all citizens of Dreamland.
Cheers,
Mark Butkus

Brian Miller said...

i got a few dreams i would not mind inhabiting...

Claudia said...

isn't it great to become a citizen of dreamland every once and a while..flying wingless...nice..

vivinfrance said...

In dreamland, anything is possible. Good poem.

Traci B said...

I enjoyed this read; I've often dreamed of flying wingless and dancing on air. Something I often wish I could do in our physical reality.

Raven's Wing Poetry said...

I have always wanted to fly, but I kept envisioning myself with wings. You trumped me on this one. Beautiful, Guatami.

-Nicole

skyraft said...

Many great lines here. And "flying wingless" is just an amazing concept.

Morning said...

lovely.

Happy Holidays.

5thsister said...

Oooooh. Love it! Dreams are my thing and I've begun flying wingless as well! As a full fledged citizen of the Land of Dreams, I welcome you!

G-Man said...

Miss Gautami...?
The missing Gautami?
Loved your 55 Dream Girl
Thanks for playing, thanks for remembering, and have a Kick Ass Week-End