I circled the purple
a game I played
as luck would have it
I had no trouble winning
my dream allow me to be flexible
I become a citizen of one the states of dreamland
far beyond earth, earth year
I don't lag behind
as I now fly wingless
no friction to curtail me
"happenstance?"
22 comments:
Nice, Gautami. Concise and pretty.
Pamela
circle the purple, that's an interesting game, could be taken many ways.
Love your title and I like the idea of flying wingless!
Love the title... a great piece!
no friction to curtail me - I like that!
a citizen of dreamland - I like it, and the idea of flying wingless...
Awesome! Fly free!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/
I love "citizen of dreamland"...lovely.
No friction, indeed! Abstract and playful.
happenstance in dream land, yes possible and true :)
happy gooseberry day!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/19/in-the-silence/
Lovely! Flying wingless does sound wonderful.
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel
'Citizen of dreamland' - I am one too!!! This was a good read.. and so fresh!!! :)
At this time of year we are all citizens of Dreamland.
Cheers,
Mark Butkus
i got a few dreams i would not mind inhabiting...
isn't it great to become a citizen of dreamland every once and a while..flying wingless...nice..
In dreamland, anything is possible. Good poem.
I enjoyed this read; I've often dreamed of flying wingless and dancing on air. Something I often wish I could do in our physical reality.
I have always wanted to fly, but I kept envisioning myself with wings. You trumped me on this one. Beautiful, Guatami.
-Nicole
Many great lines here. And "flying wingless" is just an amazing concept.
lovely.
Happy Holidays.
Oooooh. Love it! Dreams are my thing and I've begun flying wingless as well! As a full fledged citizen of the Land of Dreams, I welcome you!
Miss Gautami...?
The missing Gautami?
Loved your 55 Dream Girl
Thanks for playing, thanks for remembering, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
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