I climb out of the windowin the middle of the day
to get a grip on the clouds
my gold fish has escaped
riding that yellow kite
I hover at the opening
the trees make fun of me
I could never nudge the trunks
but they allowed fortune tellers
my fortune flies in the sky
floating with that fish
I fan myself, latching the window
"I am too agitated to breathe"
34 comments:
You've caught a daydream... :)
I love the final stanza with all the f words! Miraculous writing!
A wonderfully fanciful poem! Wouldn't it be nice......
very unique...
Nice magpie!
Wonderful poem! Thanks
A very nice escape!
Very exciting poetry..somehow I feel I could dream that! This fortune teller says: you will do more great work!!
I love this! Woven like a dream
I climb out the window in the middle of the day. Love this.
I love this dream. It reminds me of Amelie!
A delightful dream - agitation would be a good reaction to watching your gold fish ride a yellow kite!
I love the imagery, well done!
fanciful and well written :)
I am at loss with words..here on your page..fantastic imagination and writing..
"I climb out of the window
in the middle of the day
to get a grip on the clouds" I like the image this creates.
Lovely poem! It's amazing how we all come up with such different takes on the same words.
ooh i love every bit of this! so creative. thanks for linking with imperfect prose. hope to see you there again. e.
http://canvaschild.blogspot.com
this is so cute it is very surreal.... is there a white rabbit in a waist coat or a cat with a rather large smile? :-)
this one swept me away, and brought me back in. Thanks for visiting my blog. you are a talented writer.
What a fantasy! makes me breathless :)
very nicely done. i lik ehte imagery and the playfulness...
u did well..
beautiful piece.
very dreamy!
Interesting to walk through someone else's dream.
And thank you for visiting my blog. I love to have visitors, and kind words are always appreciated.
Kay, Alberta
Dreamy n hopefull...
I Loved it!
You have a tremendous knack for imagery. Nicely written!
loved it, so whimsical
unique magicpie..
--Someone Is Special--
love the whimsy--great magpie!
What a whimsical little ditty. I love it. Some days I wish I could get a grip on the clouds myself.
Nicely written whimsical piece.
Dream weaver and a dream catcher of flight of fantasy ...
enchanting poem.
Joanny
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/
Good one gautami... Very fascinating ...
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