a tablet of time broken-
no one can break the aeons
they move so fast
in a blink.
here the tablet lies in debris
the moments already passed
into eternity
I see the dates
(a day of masquerades?)
I bury myself under the tablet,
into the debris,
fall asleep, with time
I don't need any other lover
21 comments:
Nice Mag. Fitting t the prompt indeed. Love and Light, Sender
Very well written!
Nice images. You've managed well to do two prompts in one poem!
thats very well written.
Very imaginative, Gautami!
Beautiful... and tightly written.
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Wysteria
Very nice. The last line was a surprise.
I like the broken marker representing broken time. Excellent.
Another excellent last line.
I like this; it makes me think of a nostalgia to be part of something bigger, stretching back through time.
Very good. I like it.
whew...i like the last line especially...nice close...
Time can be a great friend but a dangerous lover! :-)
Fine writing... broken time was very nicely done....
Very true my friend. Well done.
Ah, so very clever and well-crafted!
very well written-nice Magpie
I love the first line 'tablet of time broken' well written piece
Only you could write a poem like this. Perfect.
curling up in the cracks of history with Father Time :)
Broken tablet,,broken time. It seemed to me you were talking to her,,,as you don't need another lover. Very nice,I like it
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