Sunday, January 31, 2010

fantasizing about glass



that glass of water-
water swirls of it suddenly
uncannily I see you

20 comments:

Percy Bisque Silley said...

that glass of Guinness-
insight into it suddenly:
uncannily cause no can

Stan Ski said...

Maelstrom or ripple...?

Sweetest in the Gale said...

This made me thirsty...lol. Great haiku!

Tumblewords: said...

Nice!

Bill said...

Keats's name was written in water.

Yousei Hime said...

You manage the Monday Poetry Train, right? I've got another post for today, not a poem. There is an informal contest on another site and I've posted info about it.

http://tasmith1122.wordpress.com/2010/02/01/word-of-the-month-poems-contest/

If you think it's appropriate, would you consider posting it i the comments on Monday's Train? If not, don't worry about it. Hope you'll consider writing for it.

Like what you see in the water!

madeline d. murray said...

Lovely haiku, Guatami. It's title twists it to another place.

Greyscale Territory said...

Love how the title gives a certain ironic twist to see that persona as an illusion of sorts! Lovely haiku!

Julie Jordan Scott said...

Those who bombard our thoughts also take form in our water swirls. I know some people like that who live in my coffee cup.

Fun writing, my friend.

sandy, from fourwinds said...

A vision, I like that.

sandy, from fourwinds said...

A vision, I like that.

Linda Jacobs said...

I like the immediacy of this haiku.

Percy Bisque Silley said...

Ssndy, Sandy: Double vision - have you considered trifocals?

Andy Sewina said...

Make no bones about it! There's a wet reality in this!!

<3

one more believer said...

jeeez, sometimes it's just all about them...everywhere...

Cassiopeia Rises said...

A nice one Tami. You linked them all at once. Love it.


Melanie

Ana said...

good word and image play, I like how "suddenly uncannily" swirl together...

flaubert said...

I agree that glass of water made me thirsty. Nice!

Pamela

Wayne Pitchko said...

nice haiku Gautami..it is always about whats in the glass...cheers

Erin Davis said...

Loved staring into your glass...