Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Sunday, January 31, 2010
sensors work overtime
so difficult to fathom for most yet so easy for me that instant rapport without reproach going on a straightline I stop. bending over the curve I touch that milestone.
my sensors worked towards it I turned towards you and intend to stay cosseted
Do you curve grades for your students? I always did because my expectations were much higher than merely passing. Hardly ever did anyone ace one of my tests. ..
13 comments:
Good mating of two prompts ... love the ending, being pampered is a blessing.
It is amazing that the chemistry of first meeting a soul mate is so powerful.
Delightful poem.
First meetings can be everything.
"my sensors worked towards it
I turned towards you"
I love the symmetry of these lines! This poem made me feel like cheering!
I like this....you are cautious....:)
"intend" is an interesting word here, reminding us that more than one person's intention is relevant to the situation.
Instinct, caution - a symbiotic relationship.
Maybe our sensors are intuition? Being able to meet and instantly connect with people is a gift.
lovely moment fixed in words.
What a beautiful, intimate moment.
Good idea! I would be inclined to stay there, too! :) Nice work!
what magic! i'm glad you rode the curve and didn't overthink it.
"Going on the straight line," huh?
Do you curve grades for your students? I always did because my expectations were much higher than merely passing. Hardly ever did anyone ace one of my tests.
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