fog lifts from within
I see with clarity
of my future ahead.
with no plans
it suddenly materialised
out of nothing.
you made it happen
you will make it happen-
the likes of which I never envisaged.
I give in to you
and you give in to me
inevitability is just accepted.
"that yes, you simply picked up from me;
sunny days, I stole from you"
14 comments:
wonderful :
inevitability is just accepted
Love how the poem seems to swirl toward that last image of stolen sunny days! Very beautiful!
A delightful theft!
Oh, yes! That ending says it all!
Really enjoyed your poem.
Lovely read!
Clarity from the fog within, and no plans. Where does that special person take you? Do the plans come together or invoke more uncertainty?
a beautiful post! loved it!
Some things are just meant to be.
Sorry about the anon. comment - it was me (Stan Ski) - I'm logged into blogspot... dunno why that happened...
Stan Ski - Elephant Small
This sunny days made me smile :)
:) and i smiled!
YESSSSSSSS!
I like the circle shown here! Wonderfully sunny!
Tami, lovely lovely lovely.
Melanie
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