Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
“Less Is Best” - ? For Cassiopeia By Percy Bisque Silley, Knighted
Less is best - yet how much less? Less by half or less two times? Nursery-rhyme short Or less than “War and Peace” Which still could be a lot? With derision then I snort upon thine imprecision And with condescension Perforce must say again: "Whatever" Only when I said it first Upon Gautami’s thread My comment's length Was ever so much less than this, Indeed, it was much less Than all those others writ before And therefore Best.
incandescent emotions aglow within my heart... Nice I love this one Thanks for Sharing. I look forward to reading you again next week. Larry. I'm posted also just follow the link below.
23 comments:
Clever to use links in the haiku back to the memes -- I like it, and the poem, serving two purposes and doing it so well.
Good job!
Hmm, nice...warm
Sweet light...
Whatever
Very well done-I have link envy too.
Nicely put Tami. Less is best.
Melanie
a sweet old to love
Old flames can be extinguished - some stay alight...
“Less Is Best” - ?
For Cassiopeia
By Percy Bisque Silley, Knighted
Less is best - yet how much less?
Less by half or less two times?
Nursery-rhyme short
Or less than “War and Peace”
Which still could be a lot?
With derision then
I snort upon thine imprecision
And with condescension
Perforce must say again:
"Whatever"
Only when I said it first
Upon Gautami’s thread
My comment's length
Was ever so much less than this,
Indeed, it was much less
Than all those others writ before
And therefore Best.
Yours in Triumph,
Sir Percy
so sweet.....
beautiful expression .. so much love filled :)
Very nice!
Happy New year!
Love the heavy, multi-textured beauty of "incandescent emotions"! Beautiful haiku!
Like fine wine, you need to let this breathe...
<3
Ooh, that's pretty.
Love it.
Brilliant - again!
incandescent emotions aglow within my heart... Nice I love this one Thanks for Sharing. I look forward to reading you again next week.
Larry.
I'm posted also just follow the link below.
For My Wife
Nicely done!
Oh, what a nice feeling to write about.
It is so true that love shines through.
hello g...that love could last a lifetime along with the wrinkles...now that is heaven on earth....
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