Sunday, January 24, 2010

the inevitability of yes

fog lifts from within
I see with clarity
of my future ahead.
with no plans
it suddenly materialised
out of nothing.
you made it happen
you will make it happen-
the likes of which I never envisaged.
I give in to you
and you give in to me
inevitability is just accepted.

"that yes, you simply picked up from me;
sunny days, I stole from you"

14 comments:

Tammie Lee said...

wonderful :

inevitability is just accepted

Greyscale Territory said...

Love how the poem seems to swirl toward that last image of stolen sunny days! Very beautiful!

SandyCarlson said...

A delightful theft!

Linda Jacobs said...

Oh, yes! That ending says it all!

John said...

Really enjoyed your poem.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Lovely read!

Loch Rob said...

Clarity from the fog within, and no plans. Where does that special person take you? Do the plans come together or invoke more uncertainty?

Amity said...

a beautiful post! loved it!

Anonymous said...

Some things are just meant to be.

Stan Ski said...

Sorry about the anon. comment - it was me (Stan Ski) - I'm logged into blogspot... dunno why that happened...
Stan Ski - Elephant Small

Maggie said...

This sunny days made me smile :)

Americanising Desi said...

:) and i smiled!

YESSSSSSSS!

Tumblewords: said...

I like the circle shown here! Wonderfully sunny!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Tami, lovely lovely lovely.



Melanie