Friday, July 22, 2011


photo credits: reymundo

I escalate to the top
almost touching the sky
the eerie blue light
hurl me into mystical place

my palm touch palpable vacuum
in those steps,
I spin like a top
in the holed ground

endlessly waiting for your smile
in the deep green eyes
when it finally shows
I become a beautiful chrysalis


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Brian Miller said...

to finally see someone after a trip...yes it is like a rebirth...

Cheryl said...

I loved this imagery. I could feel the depth of that smile as it reached those green eyes.

G-Man said...

Oh Yeah Gautami, I love green eyes!
Love as well where they take me.
Excellent 55 My Friend.
Thanks for playing, and have a kick Ass Week-End

Alice Audrey said...

The picture reminds me of taking the train in Wash DC.

Mama Zen said...

The ending is so lovely!

Anonymous said...

The final stanza is a real beaut. " I become a chrysalis". Touching visual.

Jingle said...


love the ending, well done.

ds said...

Last stanza is brilliant. Lovely poem. Thank you.