but your banter stops me
I fumble in the ground
and glance towards the sky
and write a letter
copying from the etched teardrops
I see my girl pal, cycling away afar
and run towards her
we both pedal away our moods
she her adrenalin,
I, my hibernation plan!
19 comments:
..i am planning for a hibernation too right after the board this close december.. can't wait to do that.. thanks for the poem.(:
~Kelvin
"hibernation" good to sleep and dream; maybe the "girl pal" would be interested..lots of books to read! Fun!
It's the awakening that I look forward too.Maybe all the troubles of life have gone.......I doubt it!
good to have a plan even if you don't follow through on it, something to look forward to I always say
sometimes we all want to hibernate but luckily there are people that helps us.:)
I wouldn't mind hibernating for a while!
Exercise away the blues...yup.
It's good to have such a buddy.
- Alice
Awwww....
Honey are you tired?
Get some sleep.
Loved your 55 Gautami.
You always write with such class.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
smiles. too bad, a little hibernation can be a good thing...
Sometimes I think we do need to step away from things, but it's lovely when our friends call us back.
Loved your 55, gautami.
My 55:
Skedaddle
Curious how our plans can be altered just by a friend being there and despite differences togetherness is sufficient to enjoy the others company. There is a lot more to be found in this piece than at first sight. I enjoyed it.
I wish I could just sleep a whole night through! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem.
My 55 is at:
http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/07/friday-flash-55-last-call-july-29-2011.html
Think I'm sticking with hibernation!
My 55 are here
My 55 may make you want to hibernate for sure! LOL
sometimes you need a hand to steer you away from hibernation and keep pedalling..great piece..of many layers..Jae
I'd be peddling away adrenalin. Grab the adventures while you can. :)
There is no denying it: a semi-clad woman on a bicycle can ruin the best laid plans.
Lovely poem.
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