Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Sunday, July 03, 2011
gravitational pull
"I want to sizzle with you in the beach" when I uttered those words- you turned towards me, those glorious eyes examined me
10 comments:
Just fabulous.. magic here.. well done..
I can imagine the scene. And feel it.
Sensuous feel to your Sunday 160. Thanks for playing along.
oh! I like this...I've disappeared into craters like that!
You created a warm sensation - a positive vibration, evocative write.
joanny
This is wonderful--I've felt that gravitational pull myself!
romantic and hot.
what a treat.
What a steamy write Tami. Love it. His eyes must be something else. Thank you...
Melanie
Very interesting - when he acknowledges you, you disappear. I like it!
Oh no! Come out of that crater and sizzle! :)
Good one.
Here is mine:
http://wordsinverse.wordpress.com/2011/07/06/the-void/
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