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| photo credits: reymundo I escalate to the top almost touching the sky the eerie blue light hurl me into mystical place my palm touch palpable vacuum in those steps, I spin like a top in the holed ground endlessly waiting for your smile in the deep green eyes when it finally shows I become a beautiful chrysalis ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~     |
Friday, July 22, 2011
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to finally see someone after a trip...yes it is like a rebirth...
I loved this imagery. I could feel the depth of that smile as it reached those green eyes.
Oh Yeah Gautami, I love green eyes!
Love as well where they take me.
Excellent 55 My Friend.
Thanks for playing, and have a kick Ass Week-End
The picture reminds me of taking the train in Wash DC.
The ending is so lovely!
The final stanza is a real beaut. " I become a chrysalis". Touching visual.
lovely.
love the ending, well done.
Last stanza is brilliant. Lovely poem. Thank you.
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