Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Sunday, July 17, 2011
Confetti of time
photographer Rosie Hardy
a phantom of myself blowing away cobwebs of time I ponder in midst of confetti scattered by unknown forces I'm not getting any younger
23 comments:
yikes, you must be folded up pretty tight...nice textures to this...the cobwebs of time...
I need some air...such a tiny space. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.
You capture a moment preceding conscious change—questioning of growing older and being in time.
I am blown away by this...like the cobwebs of time...well done...Namaste...Peace and blessings
nice word play....Happy sunday!
I ponder in midst of confetti
scattered by unknown forces
Intriguing, nicely played enjambment.
I can feel those cobwebs. Very well done,
Namaste..........cj
nicely done.. compression poems i like..
A haunting image you capture, and fits the picture prompt well...nice write...
good use of your words
you accomplished a lot here
Well done!
Just love this line...I ponder in midst of confetti
scattered by unknown forces
How many words we leave like scattered confetti upon the unknown forces/faces.
such a great job.
this is great.
love your 160.
thought provoking.
I'm not either!
Very clever interpretation of the prompt.
Very interesting take on Phantom, Gautami!!
Gautami,
As I have said so many times, it is pleasure to read you. I liked Walk the Past and this one the best out of pending ones I read.
Take care
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Oooh, lovely poem. Like the image of confetti... than so well describes the confusion of memory!
Best wishes,
Anna
Books are heavy-Anna's SC wk 63
I like your take on the prompt! Great work...
love the scattering... it somehow makes everything all right...
very intense. i can picture the moment
My Centus
Oh wow. What perfect visualization. How creative you were to twist the link in this direction. Your writing always surprises me and makes me think.
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