Sunday, July 03, 2011

gravitational pull

"I want to sizzle with you in the beach"
when I uttered those words-
you turned towards me,
those glorious eyes examined me

"then I disappeared into a crater"

10 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

Just fabulous.. magic here.. well done..

Harshad mehta said...

I can imagine the scene. And feel it.

Monkey Man said...

Sensuous feel to your Sunday 160. Thanks for playing along.

Sue said...

oh! I like this...I've disappeared into craters like that!

joanny said...

You created a warm sensation - a positive vibration, evocative write.

joanny

bodhirose said...

This is wonderful--I've felt that gravitational pull myself!

Jingle said...

romantic and hot.
what a treat.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

What a steamy write Tami. Love it. His eyes must be something else. Thank you...


Melanie

twitches said...

Very interesting - when he acknowledges you, you disappear. I like it!

Shail said...

Oh no! Come out of that crater and sizzle! :)

Good one.
Here is mine:
http://wordsinverse.wordpress.com/2011/07/06/the-void/