Sunday, September 11, 2011

invasion

you are not here-
you are here
my notebook knows
invisible words form there
emotions jump all over
spilling into my space

you invaded it, 
now refuse to let go

21 comments:

Brian Miller said...

i hope you see the other side of the invasion soon enough...smile.s

Monkey Man said...

Great Sunday 160. Thanks for playing.

Harshad mehta said...

who is holding on? :)

Ramesh Sood said...

I think I have said it in many more words a bit differently ..as usual.. but you amaze me always.. love reading you here..and thanks you fro a prompt that touched somewhere deep..

Nanka said...

Must be very interesting words all over!! Did they march aggressively to invade or had grander plans and still live in hope?? ;)

Larry, aka The Kid and The Old Goat said...

A poem that can have meanings both dark and light.

Larry

izzy said...

Someone poured wax on your notebook and it scatters feelings willy-nilly!
Good one! Thanks.

bodhirose said...

That's some invasion you have going on there--very clever.

Gayle ~

teric said...

Thanks for such a fun prompt.
Love your words, always so thought-provoking.

Alice Audrey said...

People do have a way of getting under one's skin.

mareymercy said...

Interesting take on the prompt.

ρομπερτ said...

Feels as bit like the impossibility of not breathing. Life. A chance to win. Love the last two lines.

Please have a good new week.

daily athens

Maggie said...

I can truely relate...it is the invisible words which can invade a person`s space...

Evelyn said...

our notebooks do know!
they keep secrets too.

Morning said...

love it.
smiles.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Very clever and interesting write. Nicely done!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/

fiveloaf said...

refreshing write! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/04/09/summer-wind/

dakshi said...

Lovely...

Ann LeFlore said...

very well done and this can have a meaning in both side of light and dark
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/27/the-island-breeze/

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Ah Tami so true but wonderful. Keep them close.


Melanie

Celestial Dreamz said...

so true and very beautiful ...