Sunday, September 11, 2011

invasion

you are not here-
you are here
my notebook knows
invisible words form there
emotions jump all over
spilling into my space

you invaded it, 
now refuse to let go

21 comments:

Brian Miller said...

i hope you see the other side of the invasion soon enough...smile.s

Monkey Man said...

Great Sunday 160. Thanks for playing.

Harshad Mehta said...

who is holding on? :)

Ramesh Sood said...

I think I have said it in many more words a bit differently ..as usual.. but you amaze me always.. love reading you here..and thanks you fro a prompt that touched somewhere deep..

Nanka said...

Must be very interesting words all over!! Did they march aggressively to invade or had grander plans and still live in hope?? ;)

nitewrit said...

A poem that can have meanings both dark and light.

Larry

izzy said...

Someone poured wax on your notebook and it scatters feelings willy-nilly!
Good one! Thanks.

Anonymous said...

That's some invasion you have going on there--very clever.

Gayle ~

Anonymous said...

Thanks for such a fun prompt.
Love your words, always so thought-provoking.

Alice Audrey said...

People do have a way of getting under one's skin.

mareymercy said...

Interesting take on the prompt.

Anonymous said...

Feels as bit like the impossibility of not breathing. Life. A chance to win. Love the last two lines.

Please have a good new week.

daily athens

Maggie said...

I can truely relate...it is the invisible words which can invade a person`s space...

Evelyn said...

our notebooks do know!
they keep secrets too.

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...

love it.
smiles.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Very clever and interesting write. Nicely done!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/

Anonymous said...

refreshing write! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/04/09/summer-wind/

dakshi said...

Lovely...

Ann LeFlore said...

very well done and this can have a meaning in both side of light and dark
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/27/the-island-breeze/

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Ah Tami so true but wonderful. Keep them close.


Melanie

Celestial Dreamz said...

so true and very beautiful ...