Sunday, September 18, 2011

thigh high

I declare open war
why don't you buy me a car
controls vibrate my thigh
In the autumn I feel high
if you think that's swell
I would settle for diamonds as well
...............................


WRITTEN TO THE MELODY OF: Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star

25 comments:

beckyp said...

hope you get your car I want one too

Ramesh Sood said...

Well done.. this is good...

Anna said...

I hope you get your car too.

Why does this song make me think of Janice Joplin's song:'Oh Lord, why don't you buy me a Mer-ce-des-Benz? I've been dialing for dollars, I must make amends!'

Yep. I know the feeling. I would not mind getting a car myself. It does not have to be a big luxury model. Even a Skoda would do.

Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC wk 72'In the Autumn'

Happier Than a Pig in Mud said...

...yep, diamonds are good too:@)

Cheryl said...

Nicely done!

izzy said...

Diamonds and cars... like that!

Nonna Beach said...

Well written and made me chuckle !

In the past, when I was younger, I would have taken diamonds over a car but now practical me would take the car and hope for diamonds later...

Viki said...

I liked this little ditty and the direction you went in. It was really different which is good in my book, ha. Just great!!

jfb57 said...

I think I'd go for the diamonds! Great take on the prompt!

I'm hosting another 100 word thingy. You can see it here.http://jfb57.wordpress.com/2011/09/12/100-word-challenge-for-grown-ups-week-10/

New prompt goes up Monday evening!

Alice Audrey said...

Diamonds are nice, but I'd like the car better.

Brian Miller said...

ha...presents are not a bad thing at all...

Mama Zen said...

This cracked me up!

bodhirose said...

I prefer a car over diamonds--I'm a very practical girl! Nice.

Morning said...

love it,
fun rhyming and
I prefer a car too.

Judie said...

I can do with out the diamonds, but not without a car!! Good choice!!

fiveloaf said...

wowo- thats materialism explained in such short words haha! i like this! tq for sharing.. my gooseberry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/16/helpless/

Dazee Dreamer said...

hahahahaha.

Friko said...

Good luck; I'd be happy with a car or diamonds too.
If you get them, tell me how?

Ann LeFlore said...

good luck on a new car and some diamonds too this is very cute
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/19/my-world/#comment-972

cj Schlottman said...

Very cool! I think I'd " settle for diamonds..."

Namste..........cj

charleslmashburn said...

Love it! Doesn't hurt to ask! Nice one!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/19/fragile-cloth-2/

ds said...

I think I'd take the car...
Great fun, this!

Mary said...

I quite like this. Wny not wish for car, diamonds, and......why stop there!! Nicely crafted.

Sean Vessey said...

Perfect Poem / song - a diamond shines brightly here

http://knightsheart.wordpress.com/

you have been there before ..
:-)

Jenny said...

What a different cadence this little poem has.

I liked the imagery here.

Neat share! Thank you!