Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Sunday, September 18, 2011
thigh high
I declare open war why don't you buy me a car controls vibrate my thigh In the autumn I feel high if you think that's swell I would settle for diamonds as well
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WRITTEN TO THE MELODY OF: Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star
Why does this song make me think of Janice Joplin's song:'Oh Lord, why don't you buy me a Mer-ce-des-Benz? I've been dialing for dollars, I must make amends!'
Yep. I know the feeling. I would not mind getting a car myself. It does not have to be a big luxury model. Even a Skoda would do.
wowo- thats materialism explained in such short words haha! i like this! tq for sharing.. my gooseberry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/16/helpless/
24 comments:
hope you get your car I want one too
Well done.. this is good...
I hope you get your car too.
Why does this song make me think of Janice Joplin's song:'Oh Lord, why don't you buy me a Mer-ce-des-Benz? I've been dialing for dollars, I must make amends!'
Yep. I know the feeling. I would not mind getting a car myself. It does not have to be a big luxury model. Even a Skoda would do.
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC wk 72'In the Autumn'
...yep, diamonds are good too:@)
Nicely done!
Diamonds and cars... like that!
Well written and made me chuckle !
In the past, when I was younger, I would have taken diamonds over a car but now practical me would take the car and hope for diamonds later...
I liked this little ditty and the direction you went in. It was really different which is good in my book, ha. Just great!!
I think I'd go for the diamonds! Great take on the prompt!
I'm hosting another 100 word thingy. You can see it here.http://jfb57.wordpress.com/2011/09/12/100-word-challenge-for-grown-ups-week-10/
New prompt goes up Monday evening!
Diamonds are nice, but I'd like the car better.
ha...presents are not a bad thing at all...
I prefer a car over diamonds--I'm a very practical girl! Nice.
love it,
fun rhyming and
I prefer a car too.
I can do with out the diamonds, but not without a car!! Good choice!!
wowo- thats materialism explained in such short words haha! i like this! tq for sharing.. my gooseberry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/16/helpless/
hahahahaha.
Good luck; I'd be happy with a car or diamonds too.
If you get them, tell me how?
good luck on a new car and some diamonds too this is very cute
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/19/my-world/#comment-972
Very cool! I think I'd " settle for diamonds..."
Namste..........cj
Love it! Doesn't hurt to ask! Nice one!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/19/fragile-cloth-2/
I think I'd take the car...
Great fun, this!
I quite like this. Wny not wish for car, diamonds, and......why stop there!! Nicely crafted.
Perfect Poem / song - a diamond shines brightly here
http://knightsheart.wordpress.com/
you have been there before ..
:-)
What a different cadence this little poem has.
I liked the imagery here.
Neat share! Thank you!
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