Monday, November 21, 2011

moon sways

the moon sings to the stars
it is sight to behold
the stars swaying to melody
celestial dance of eternal love
soaks into my pores
moon is all alone
yet never lonely
spiritual love of the sun
gives it a glow, a light
which does not belong to it
yet sun is seeking the moon
giving its own light
they get across to each other
through the darkness
dispelling it for us
the day in the month sun sulks
the moon hides
yet the stars dance in the euphoria

"my vote goes for you
who looks at the moon and thinks of me.
hopefully"

19 comments:

:-Dee said...

The first four lines were magical and spell binding!! Lovely poetry...

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Beautiful....and "the stars dance in euphoria." I especially love the last three lines, in italics.

Heaven said...

a night dance..lovely to see and behold ~

The Write Girl said...

This is such a beautiful poem. The sun and moon are paired together so beautifully.

Mama Zen said...

Lovely!

oldegg said...

I love the nights when the moon sulks and all those other stars peep out and say hello. A beautiful piece of writing.

zongrik said...

the moon is just a big tease

Ramesh Sood said...

I am always keen on Moon and Strars and Sun.. wow!! Well sid Gautami... our votes too have purposes...

keith hillman said...

Delightful! The first four lines could stand alone as a lovely piece of their own.

Daydreamertoo said...

I'm with some of the others, the last three lines can stand alone.
Beautiful.

Brian Miller said...

nice...an excellent close...endearing and warm....

Bone said...

Filled with beauty. I loved the very last lines, too.

Shashi said...

this is lovely... I enjoyed the cosmic creation.. thanks for sharing..

Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-sighs.html
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Caty said...

such a beautiful cosmic romance you've written...I so love the moon, as does the sun which shines on it at night :)

California Ink in Motion said...

Beautiful poem. I am a fan of the moon and stars. Thank you for your visit and pointing the way to this beautiful crafting of words.

Susie Clevenger said...

I have such love for the moon. It inspires many of my writings..the moon sings to the stars...beautiful!

Berowne said...

A VERY good piece of writing -- thanks.

Laura Maria said...

Lovely through and through starting with the title. Thanks for sharing!

Morning said...

cool imagery.