the moon sings to the stars
it is sight to behold
the stars swaying to melody
celestial dance of eternal love
soaks into my pores
moon is all alone
yet never lonely
spiritual love of the sun
gives it a glow, a light
which does not belong to it
yet sun is seeking the moon
giving its own light
they get across to each other
through the darkness
dispelling it for us
the day in the month sun sulks
the moon hides
yet the stars dance in the euphoria
"my vote goes for you
who looks at the moon and thinks of me.
hopefully"
19 comments:
The first four lines were magical and spell binding!! Lovely poetry...
Beautiful....and "the stars dance in euphoria." I especially love the last three lines, in italics.
a night dance..lovely to see and behold ~
This is such a beautiful poem. The sun and moon are paired together so beautifully.
Lovely!
I love the nights when the moon sulks and all those other stars peep out and say hello. A beautiful piece of writing.
the moon is just a big tease
I am always keen on Moon and Strars and Sun.. wow!! Well sid Gautami... our votes too have purposes...
Delightful! The first four lines could stand alone as a lovely piece of their own.
I'm with some of the others, the last three lines can stand alone.
Beautiful.
nice...an excellent close...endearing and warm....
Filled with beauty. I loved the very last lines, too.
this is lovely... I enjoyed the cosmic creation.. thanks for sharing..
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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such a beautiful cosmic romance you've written...I so love the moon, as does the sun which shines on it at night :)
Beautiful poem. I am a fan of the moon and stars. Thank you for your visit and pointing the way to this beautiful crafting of words.
I have such love for the moon. It inspires many of my writings..the moon sings to the stars...beautiful!
A VERY good piece of writing -- thanks.
Lovely through and through starting with the title. Thanks for sharing!
cool imagery.
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