Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Monday, March 16, 2009
lay in lace
nipped at waist bodice laced-tight LOST IN THAT MOMENT both bodies lay together fingers nipping into waist
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22 comments:
Delicious poem
I'd say 'delicious', but Sage beat me to it.
line 3 says it all....
Certainly a good one, Gautami.
It's good to get lost in such moments - but old reality has a habit of eventually saying enough :-)
Very sensual! These few words paint quite the rich image!
I love the image...well done.
wonderful!
Well paced lace!
i'm sorry but imma use the word again: 'delicious!'
I'll say 'luscious'. :~)
I love the sound of "fingers nipping"
(and if you say it fast it sound like "finger snipping"!)
Hey, Nice One!!
You write real well ... Hope to see you tomorrow at Tell a Tale, as it launches...
Be the first one to post your entry and accumulate higher points!
Wow that was some write...sensuous!
I like how you created a nice moment with so few words.
LOVE this...
I really liked this one a lot.
Hello Gautami.
Lovely poem.
To me, this conjures a Victorian ether party, before and after the bottle is opened.
Or a coming out debutante's ball.
Great work, Gautami.
Tschuess,
Chris
hey
Good play with words!!
Very nice Tami but then you are a true poet. Lovely.
love,Melanie-bd
Ah!, How romantic..really mushy and refreshing..
Loved this!
Hi Gautami, Here I am, sorry I've been away, I could see your blog but my keyboard was swimming in coffee and would'nt let me post anything...
That Moment seems like a nice place to be Lost in!!
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