Sunday, March 14, 2010

special talent

your pregnant pauses-
are your only special talent
mine is to ignore

16 comments:

Stan Ski said...

Nicely worked for the prompts, and a good reaction to the hesitation.

Greyscale Territory said...

Ouch! To ignore has a hint of silent disdain and/or maybe an element of self protection from some imminent onslaught! Interesting word weightings in this one!

Andy Sewina said...

Phew, this is loaded! So much is being said in these lines - really well thought out!

Ninety three followers hey? I've got some catching up to do!

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Yousei Hime said...

Brilliant and funny. Thank you for sharing this.

Janet said...

brava!

Robin said...

Oh yes, this does say a lot. Very interesting take on this prompt.

fourwindshaiga said...

LOL, that hurt!

Whitesnake said...

Nicely put, with little affect!

Tumblewords: said...

Good take on the prompt - I like this - it resonates so strongly.

Dee Martin said...

wow - sometimes not communicating is much louder that speaking!

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b said...

Yes, you are so right...many times it is what is not said.

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Julie Jordan Scott said...

love the tone in this one... more than sassy, in essence...strong...

GPK said...

sharp
succinct
telling
beautiful

Lilibeth said...

Yikes. I take it this one caught you in the middle of some argument. Your skill with words is sharp.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Really nice Tami. I wish I had the guts to say as much.



Melanie

jone said...

Love this! I thought of the pregnant pauses this week that occurred at times.