Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Wednesday, March 24, 2010
doing the undoing
I come undone in totality when your brazen hunger nuzzles me I nuzzle into you my hunger is not brazenly defined yet it too totally does you in
15 comments:
Certainly gets the idea across--wow.
Beautiful words, I love the way you wrote this!
<3 Andy
It does indeed. Great words.
Well written, and very strong!
I really like the heat of this, the obvious desire.
I have been missing you, something ghostly this way came....;)
WOW. Despite being an Indian and a Mathematics teacher, you are really really good!
Great choice of words.
wow... eloquent...
A kind of Jack Sprat and his wife scenario, only much more subtly portrayed.
A touch of seriousness and a touch of wry humour! Love the mix!
Love the counterpoint - you come undone - he is done in - great stuff!
Wow...this is really an exciting take on the prompt Gautami...I could feel the excitement...:))
Oooh, great job -- you portray the passionate cross currents so well. :)
an exchange without cost...yes, no!!??
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