Friday, February 04, 2011

sinning through the skin

totally relaxed, I cling to you
my arms creep around you
but you clutch me tight
knowing I need that aftermath
our heightened senses linger in the room
golden hue of fantasy has become a reality
I again touch your glistening skin
you steal away my shallow breath

"I stay alive breathing through your skin"


14 comments:

Brian Miller said...

very sensual piece...wrapped in the skin of that other....

Eric 'Bubba' Alder said...

I've noticed lately that your writing sounds like a woman in love, Gautami. The thought makes me smile - I hope it's true! :)

A sweet, tender 55.

Monkey Man said...

Whew. Let me catch my breath. Great passionate 55.

Margaret Bednar said...

Yes, full of passion! And sounds like an understanding lover to me! :)

Willow said...

Whew, from me too, very hot, beautiful. Your last line incredible.

G-Man said...

Gautami...
WOW!!!!
This was very personal and sensual.
Top Quality writing My Friend.
I Loved your 55.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Bone said...

Liked the use of aftermath. Never heard it put that way. Creative.

Ramesh Sood said...

Sinning through...? I mean you are ending with the word 'Breathing through..' aren't they opposites...I am confused.. But poem..excellent..can's say anything on such a piece of pure passion..

Would love you to visit for OSI tomorrow . it would be my 200th post.. I haven't forgotten what you call them.. dancing verses..wow!!!

theaccidentalnovelist said...

whew, sexy. ;-)

btw - someone wrote a comment on my blog asking how to subscribe to YOUR blog by way of e-mail. I made some suggestions but I don't know what client they use. I didn't see a "subscribe by e-mail" option here.

Dulce said...

This is really sensual and beautiful... oh I especially love that title... it says so much
Great poem
D.

gautami tripathy said...

theaccidentalnovelist:

I added that subscription by email button. Thanks for letting me know. I didn't realize that I don't have it.

Strummed Words said...

I like the sensuality of it.

Alice Audrey said...

Wonderful, sweet moment. Good one, Gautami.

Travis Cody said...

Very sensual. Well done.