Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Wednesday, February 25, 2009
short verses
persistent voices interfere with my thoughts with callous regard
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comb persistantly interfere my hair's natural waves pulling it callously I TUG WITH FRUSTRATION pulling it callously natural wavy hair persistently interfere combing
aaahhh, I haven't been around these parts in quite a while sos sososo good to be back around here! These responses are brilliant and witty! Smart use of the words that I would have never thought of! mine is called Dose of Reality I hope you like it:)
15 comments:
Ah!, Lovely!..
Loved the way you've binded the two discrete events into one..
True dexterity!.
Good One!
Hey, that's my hair lol good one ;)
The first is just delightful, while the second is a hoot.
Love these Gautami! I wish I had hair long enough to pull!
I like the way you weaved the three words into the NaisaiKu..
Many thanks for taking The NaisaiKu.. Challenge! again this week.
My daughter has that hair. No conditioner can tame it-but we love those wild waves!
i can feel the frustration ... well done with both verses
lovely.
:D I like the first one so much.. it captures everyday life exquisitely.
Well well Gautami.. after all you're a master in the art.
see ya!
A.
Two excellent shorts there - especially the first.
aaahhh, I haven't been around these parts in quite a while sos sososo good to be back around here! These responses are brilliant and witty! Smart use of the words that I would have never thought of! mine is called Dose of Reality I hope you like it:)
Well done! Love your take on the prompt words...
I just finished, Sadika's way. There's a passage about unruly, wavy hair. Thought it reading your post. Thanks.
A Splitting Headache
I can definitely relate to the one about hair! And the first one flowed so smoothly...
very interesting :-)
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