Get into this train for a great ride....
hiding there-
yet aura makes known
of your presence
******
musty old letter
bringing in tears-
tears me apart
******
others' memories
are just as private
as our thoughts
******
All these and a few more were inspired by J. Andrew Lockhart.
21 comments:
Three thoughts worth consideration
Like all of them. First one especially :D
All good, but first the best.
I want to get on
the poetry train!
We're on it already!
I like the third one's realization of the inner lives of others.
i like this set..
i can relate to the letters bringing you back, flooded with tears.. and then the reminder that other's memories/thoughts are private and something you cannot control.. ultimately we have to let go of those letters!
Inspired by Andrew...nice!
Enjoyed them all very much!
Good work, Gautami!
Margie
the way they looked . . .
they must have forgotten
me by now
I like the play on words in the second with "tears"! But all three are nice crisp images!
Love the tears and tears play!
as far as the last one- yes, you're right-- doesn't mean I won't think about it, though. :)
I like them all and thank you.
I like the last verse!
yet aura makes known
of your presence
That's wonderful. What shadows can't reveal, the aura does well.
mmmm I like, especially the second one...as you know ;)
wonderful!
loved them all!
Oh, loved these...especially the first two! They had an impact.
a strong set, gautami. you were indeed inspired.
Great inspirations - well done Guatami - like where the last one takes me.
All three... grand_! _m
Hi Gautami, I'm still being torn apart by your torant of tears in fact I'm tearing my hair out!
The NaisaiKu.. prompt is up!
there's hidden poetry in your poetry. :-)
hiding there
tears me apart
as our thoughts
fun gems.
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