Monday, August 17, 2009

this journey started the right way

if you ever change your mind, give me a ring
we’ll check out the weather to take out the boat
carrying food, clothes and other essential things
go out into the sea, whirring away we float
sleeping it out on the boat, soaking the sun in
to prevent from skin burns, I put up a shade
applying lotions, sunscreens on your fair skin
so soft, so smooth to touch, as velvety as suede

If you rather not we will go to the beach
watch the sea waves so beautifully blue
against my better judgement I slowly reach
out, pulling you into me to love all of you

just when you ask me to take you back to land
reaching for your finger, I push in the gold band!


poefusion said...

Yes indeed! This relationship started the right way. Really nice writing. Happy Monday~

Bill said...

Took me by surprise.

anthonynorth said...

Good ending. And that's quite a relationship.

Melissa Russell said...

Nice! I'm a romantic at heart! Enjoyed this.

Linda Jacobs said...

Beautiful descriptions in here!

Stan Ski said...

Fantastic jouney - long may it continue!

George S Batty said...

and he didn't even have to get down on one knee or did he? lovely poetry. good work

Lorraine said...

Oh romance 'en cachette' very sneaky and poetic and beautiful and passionate :)

Julia Phillips Smith said...

*grin* Twisty! And delightful.

Ralf Bröker said...

Wish I had a clear view into the last two lines: at the moment I think you gave her no chance to say no ... surprising one!

Best wishes

Jeeves said...

Brilliant...The ending esp...Too good

Janice Thomson said...

Loved the ending...a lovely journey indeed.

Rinkly Rimes said...

Certainly a lot of planning there!But the finale seemed pretty spontaneous!

cyclopseven said...

Positive flow full of hope.