irresistible progeny of internet
uses exulting language
vowelized words croak
capricious, insolent, vehement
do these work together?
cosmoranic rebrobates
sounds good to me
I let the investment lie low
words need to cool down before
exploded chelations hit me hard
22 comments:
A great use of the words.
Inventive use of spam.
Oh yeah love the cosmoranic rebrobates lol great great expression
Compacted, concise and creative. The mixture works
Gautami. Thank you for your clever approach.
I really like the idea of spam as progeny of the internet, and of spam both exulting and croaking. Dead on great perception, and use of the words.
a very creative piece. hope all is well.
Hi Gautami,
This certainly sounds good to me!
I don't 'do' poetry, but this makes me want to...
I hope they don't hit you too hard.
This make me smile. That alone makes it worthwhile...
A meta-poem on the words themselves -- I liked the approach and enjoyed the read.
-Nicole
from Therese L. Broderick -- someone once told me that a good poem is one which works even if only the last words of each line are read. This poem passes that test very well! Read just these last words: internet...language...croak...vehement...together...rebrobates...me...low...before...hard
yep. you nailed it
Namaste, you certainly were able to put all the Wordle together, something I found impossible to accomplish. Good rhythm too.
Regards,
DH
I love your ending, Gautami:
words need to cool down before
exploded chelations hit me hard
So impressed...you did it! I found the words impossible this week, yet you were able to string together the mass of them into something artistic...good for you!
A thunder and lightning of words, crushing down on my late-night-brain, kicking away the romantic idea of a friendly moon. Good one.
Best wishes
Ralf
Wow. Not a single word left unspent, and so succinct as well! Bravo, Guatami
nicely done Guatami...love that exploding ending...thanks for sharing
I noticed that we both started with lines that read [adjective] [noun] of [noun]. I wonder if many others did and, if so, why.
quite impressive word choice...
very well written
Good job!
Very creative, nice read
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