Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Sunday, December 05, 2010
fairy tale
golden wings it stood there near that stream creature so beautiful I circled from it it was gone I felt an itch on my shoulder blades
I read the itching on your shoulders differently - that there was a fairly tapping you on the shoulder. Either way, I like the simplicity yet dreaminess of this piece.
Ooohhh... how cool would that be!! Watching Harry Potter(and the magical creatures in the movies) puts such ideas into my head... And now, your beautiful words made me feel it all over again...
Whenever you witness something unbelievably beautiful I am sure an itch is the very least response you could make. My own gasp of wonder and amazement would surely frighten it away.
24 comments:
Hi Gautami - this is very playful..I love the thought of itching for your fairy wings! Jae
Dreamy! :)
A lovely and rich selection.
Like the "itching on my shoulder blades". Nice atmosphere.
A spritely tale. Love this 160. Thanks for playing along.
Fairy wings itching on my shoulder... nice, playful piece.
haunting and thought provoking
woke up my mind.
perhaps you had :) - nicely written 160
Inspired 160. I love the imagery you've created with so few words.
So sweet. What a fantastic dream.
one can hope. A faerie is a lovely thing to be. (I know!)
oh, name, url field?
http://faystoo.blogspot.com/
ah how sweet - I think you have
Hope you have a nice week ahead
I hope not!
I read the itching on your shoulders differently - that there was a fairly tapping you on the shoulder. Either way, I like the simplicity yet dreaminess of this piece.
This is truly wonderful gautami.. Thanks for stopping by my thoughts..
--Someone is Special--
Magical 160, Gautami--loved your fairy tale.
a fairy would not necessarily be a bad thing to be...smiles.
so pretty and fun :)
Ooohhh... how cool would that be!!
Watching Harry Potter(and the magical creatures in the movies) puts such ideas into my head...
And now, your beautiful words made me feel it all over again...
Whenever you witness something unbelievably beautiful I am sure an itch is the very least response you could make. My own gasp of wonder and amazement would surely frighten it away.
I've been there...surprised by joy and longing. You wrote it so well.
Lovely, and also uplifting somehow.
amazing guidance entry.
well put...
From Sunday Scribbling.
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