Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Sunday, July 10, 2011
scrolled
rough notes fragment of snatched words unspoken yet loud I find on that bench in a hollow pipe you left that scroll aeons ago and the sign read thus
19 comments:
nice.
Some people can have the effect of making us roll our words out of sight, in silence...
Brillliant!
silence is often a blessing itself...
Goodness gracious ... well done!!!
And to know the silence.. beautiful... Gautami..
I invite you to my 300th post and would love to seek your feedback..?
It will inspire..
That's lovely.
Well done!
=)
I agree with all of the above! So very lovely!
wow, so little words, but such a big impact. loved it.
A very visual piece!
I like this!
cool write,
that second line is brilliant, good one.
oh you convey so much with so few words ... this was beautiful
"unspoken yet loud" - great line!
Yes! silence is golden...and this is awesome, thank you!
"...snatched words
unspoken yet loud..."
Powerful words, I say. This is a lovely poem, expressing so much in so few words.
Namaste..........cj
Such quiet power you've shared here in so few words.
Brilliant.
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