Sunday, March 28, 2010

transient

it is two o'clock-
time when someone else’s love
becomes transiently yours

18 comments:

John's comments said...

Hi, I think we exchanged posts from my book review site about 2 years and when I start the random short story site. Small world!

Agree, the dark hours before the dawn are when you have to face your own companyHere be mine.

Erin @ Together for Good said...

Stopping by from Carry On Tuesday-- I love this. I am a sucker for a good haiku. :) I want to know the story here.

Janet said...

Nice one! I like the links:-)

Stan Ski said...

Not tonight - I'll be watching the football match (6 hours time difference)... Come on City...!

Lorraine said...

I can only think soap operas...;)

iamyuva said...

and it was 2'o clock when I lost 1hr to the summer timezone..

Andy Sewina said...

Hi Gautami,
I planned to meet you in my dreams
You dreamed you'd meet me too
No accident of fate or chance
We planned our dreams
We chose romance
Every night at two...

<3 perhaps?

Julia Smith said...

Is it because you can hear them from the next room?

sage said...

What's special about 2 o'clock? AM or PM? nice haiku

Short Poems said...

Nice one :)

Marinela

sg beatty said...

old Grizz is in awe...so much said,,so few words...nice post

RBroeker said...

To me it is the term of "someone else's love". This put's the lyrical I into the role of a love-eater. Tough haiku.

Best wishes
Ralf

mia said...

seductively mysterious.

Melissa said...

specifically unspecific, leaving you wondering, and everyone else *smiling*

illyriataylor said...

oh yes, 2a knows all of our secrets! Well done

rdl said...

Very nice!

one more believer said...

oh man my mind wonders.... possibly a cup of soothing peppermint tea....

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