Sunday, January 30, 2011

is it an illusion?

it is the same pearl
I lost in your mouth
you rolled it in your tongue
made it disappear
I did not see it until today

you keep it safe,
I only want your tongue

21 comments:

Kenia Cris said...

=)

Dainty! I liked it a lot and it made me smile.

Cheers. =*

jaerose said...

What a sensual piece..charming, fun and just, well, lovely..Jae

Alice Audrey said...

That must be some kiss!

Mama Zen said...

Nicely done!

WarmSunshine said...

reminds me of love making and french kisses some how... oolala!!

Wendy said...

ooh la la. Very erotic. By virtue of conjuring up a pearl held in the mouth, the reader brings in all the accompanying baggage of the image....the treasure, how far one has to dive in order to get said treasure, and that delicacy and deftness with which we have to handle the shell in order to get the pearl.

flaubert said...

Very sensuous piece Gautami:)
Pamela

lightverse said...

This was so sensual and sensuous and lush. What an incredible kiss,

Brian Miller said...

smoking 160...sensual perfection...

Monkey Man said...

Great Sunday 160. Thanks again for playing our little word game and bringing your extraordinary talent to it.

Tracey said...

Whew! Fanning myself! (LOL!) Perfect.

Tracey said...

PS: Wendy, your comment makes me continue to fan myself (ha!)

Jinksy said...

Sheesh! And all that from a photo of a hairy ape?! Did I miss something?

jabblog said...

Very pretty :-)
(but the wicked side of me wonders what happened to the pearl and how was it found again . . . )

Caty said...

Wow!!

bodhirose said...

What a great 160, Gautami! Simply fantastic. :)

keithsramblings said...

Made me come over a little hot! Loved it!

Kavita said...

Call me corny.. but I am thinking oysters and molluscs :) I guess it was that pearl that made me think of shells and oysters.. or maybe I am just hungry :)

But then again, this was very VERY HOT indeed! ;-)
Loved it!

Possum said...

My kneejerk reaction was a great big smile...still is. But the twist for me was the title...now I am thinking about the illusive bits.
Lovely lovely 160

Ramesh Sood said...

Is it an illusion..or so I thought reading this lovely piece.. written so well..

Tim Keen said...

Very...good, exciting.