Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Sunday, January 30, 2011
is it an illusion?
it is the same pearl I lost in your mouth you rolled it in your tongue made it disappear I did not see it until today
ooh la la. Very erotic. By virtue of conjuring up a pearl held in the mouth, the reader brings in all the accompanying baggage of the image....the treasure, how far one has to dive in order to get said treasure, and that delicacy and deftness with which we have to handle the shell in order to get the pearl.
Call me corny.. but I am thinking oysters and molluscs :) I guess it was that pearl that made me think of shells and oysters.. or maybe I am just hungry :)
But then again, this was very VERY HOT indeed! ;-) Loved it!
My kneejerk reaction was a great big smile...still is. But the twist for me was the title...now I am thinking about the illusive bits. Lovely lovely 160
21 comments:
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Dainty! I liked it a lot and it made me smile.
Cheers. =*
What a sensual piece..charming, fun and just, well, lovely..Jae
That must be some kiss!
Nicely done!
reminds me of love making and french kisses some how... oolala!!
ooh la la. Very erotic. By virtue of conjuring up a pearl held in the mouth, the reader brings in all the accompanying baggage of the image....the treasure, how far one has to dive in order to get said treasure, and that delicacy and deftness with which we have to handle the shell in order to get the pearl.
Very sensuous piece Gautami:)
Pamela
This was so sensual and sensuous and lush. What an incredible kiss,
smoking 160...sensual perfection...
Great Sunday 160. Thanks again for playing our little word game and bringing your extraordinary talent to it.
Whew! Fanning myself! (LOL!) Perfect.
PS: Wendy, your comment makes me continue to fan myself (ha!)
Sheesh! And all that from a photo of a hairy ape?! Did I miss something?
Very pretty :-)
(but the wicked side of me wonders what happened to the pearl and how was it found again . . . )
Wow!!
What a great 160, Gautami! Simply fantastic. :)
Made me come over a little hot! Loved it!
Call me corny.. but I am thinking oysters and molluscs :) I guess it was that pearl that made me think of shells and oysters.. or maybe I am just hungry :)
But then again, this was very VERY HOT indeed! ;-)
Loved it!
My kneejerk reaction was a great big smile...still is. But the twist for me was the title...now I am thinking about the illusive bits.
Lovely lovely 160
Is it an illusion..or so I thought reading this lovely piece.. written so well..
Very...good, exciting.
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