Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
The way the lines are laid out adds mystery to the 'why' and the need to color things the way they get colored. There's a throb of significance because of that.
16 comments:
Beautiful!!! The star in pocket took me someplace interesting .. thanks!!!
Gautami,
The way the lines are laid out adds mystery to the 'why' and the need to color things the way they get colored. There's a throb of significance because of that.
Trulyfool
Loved that last line.
i really like that last line as well...some interesting things to be found when cleaning out pockets...
smart ending...
very lovely put.
I feel the need to mull this one over and over...there's an under layer that intrigues me.
Interesting! I'm also curious about that title.
Very intriguing. Thanks for being a part of the Sunday 160.
Something to guide him back home? Very nice.
As always beautifully said Gautami.
oh there are mysteries I beleive in every item there.
Magnificient
cute poem. lovely.
trisha
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very interesting and mysterious...kept me pondering of the why and the what? the last line was the cherry on the cake.
just beautiful !
imaginative and beautiful!
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Gautami, this was beautiful--the last line feeling mysterious and magical.
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