Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Saturday, April 11, 2009
as discussed in a writer's workshop
I flipped the card over and over again,
writer's workhop, that too about women-
with my portfolio, I arrived at the workshop,
prepared to listen to the topic of discussion
It could be anything:
the nubile heroine's journey,
the ambiguous power of vamps
to evil stepmothers,
and the sheer pleasure of being a woman
told creatively in a wealth of fantastic stories.
so much in there to speak about woman-
her charishma, her power through the years
can you believe it, they were talking
about a heroine whose only talent rested
on her ability to sleep.
sleeping beauty waiting for her prince
is a non-entity for me. what is she
but a emotionally stranded heroine
whose awakening from death induced sleep
depends on a Prince's kiss. I would call him
a simpleton who had no vision
could he not leave her alone
and find someone better, a matured personality
who would have suited more to his wordly demeanor
sleeping for two decades tenaciously holding to life
is but a scary thought. waking her up by breath
of a kiss, he must have been curious. maybe I ought
to salute to the spirits of both, for leaving a fairy tale
for us. and a hope to live happily ever after.
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Photo Credits: http://www.illusionsgallery.com/Sleeping-Beauty-Spence-L.jpg
Labels:
fairy tale,
free verse,
sunday scribblings
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16 comments:
You are a daring woman, I'd rather think of it as a woman waiting for the breath of life, that is DEFINETELY not from a man lol, you are a wonderful,creative, writer and poet!
A good take on the fairytale. Enjoyed that.
She'll have to go to a hairdresser as soon as she wakes up!
i like daring :)
http://eternitycallsus.blogspot.com/2009/04/i-am-scared.html
This is very nice, but I found myself taken by the line towward then end, "waking up by the breath of a kiss." I thought, "after 20 years I bet she had horrible morning breath!"
Some are still searching and waiting. Lucky the one who has found hers.
I'm the sleeping woman in a way. it's just that I'm not a 'beauty' one :)
Hi Gautami, I think everything has a season, and a reason - there's another story where the Princess has to kiss a frog - I'm a bit like that frog - still waiting for my Princess.
What an interesting look at that famous tale.
Now you are not going to tell me that story isn't true are you?
always a pleasure reading your work
A great take on that old fable which is full of miss-information!
i'll never look at the sleeping beauty in the same way again ;)
sorry i haven't been around lately... sometimes other things in life take priority. i hope i'm back to stay a while...
haha... this was a good angle on sleeping beauty.
I've never thought of Sleeping Beauty as a heroine, more as a victim! That's amusing. :)
I wonder how you would tell the story today. I think it would be much different - more in line with your piece ...
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