Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Sunday, February 13, 2011
demise
ball of yarn rolls into corner tired and sad it dislikes being drawn into patterns against its will in those it sees its demise reflected in incandescent light
20 comments:
Anonymous
said...
You make two totally different words, yarn and incandescent, a joy to roll together.
20 comments:
You make two totally different words, yarn and incandescent, a joy to roll together.
Gorgeous!
Bringing a ball of yarn to life...I love that. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.
Hmmm.. inner thinking begins when people like you starting putting your thoughts in to words! :)
So many iSounds, so much power.
Best wishes
Ralf
against its will...i guess nothing likes that...
You can't create without destroying.
Poor ball of yarn. I'd always thought the yarn was thrilled to attain its destiny. Perhaps your yarn is blue.
Ouch!! Seriously, if a ball of yarn were to ever speak, this is probably what it would say! What a thoughtful 160, Gautami... so very creative!
a wonderfully creative take, i love it's depth!
Good one..this!!!
You gave life to a ball of yarn. Fantastic work
I love your image of the yarn being so very sad about being forced into something it isn't.
I think that Audrey has something there. New life in different form to be had.
That ball of yard reflects us
in the incandescent light. Very nice.
I feel that ball of yarn's sorrow--it doesn't have a say as to what it will be turned into. Not fair!
Creative, Gautami.
So know that feeling! Well said. Thank you.
hi gautami,
structure ,pattern, thought & outcome -
the way u approach poetry is probably not mathematical !
perhaps that is the power of the unknown
all the best with ur good work ..
can picture it...the yarn's demise indeed- nicely done!
Nicely written
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