Saturday, May 28, 2011

jingling chains

turquoise blue stones on my wrist
are at home
I jingle silvers chains that hold them
sheen of green peeps through blue
when a butterfly flutters nearby
I let it sit on my bracelet
an antique, one of the legacy of heroes maybe
those heroes who were really sea pirates

"let the guitar play you"

24 comments:

Christine said...

enjoyed all the imagery here,
blue turquoise, silver chains, butterfly flutters.

A Daft Scots Lass said...

Lovely

jfb57 said...

Beautiful use of imagery!

Judie said...

A very interesting take on the prompt!

Sue said...

Colorful images here.

=)

G-Man said...

Gautami...
I Love turqoise.
I Loved your 55.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Sunday...G

Jingle said...

stunning.

jeff campbell said...

So very interesting and unexpected ;-) Peace and blessings

Keda said...

Thanks so much for coming by my site. I see you ahve a poetry site and I would like to invite you to visit my site www.poetrytalkingtotrees.blogspot.com. It is more of a creative writing site, I dabble in it all.

Anyway - back to you:

THis is such a fun post, loved the imagery, the sounds, the colours, the feelings, the visions - everything that it brought up was very vivid. Lovely work.

Nonna Beach said...

A novel and lovely vision, chock full of beautiful textures...very enjoyable...excellent job !

Kathe W. said...

love all the images!

Alice Audrey said...

I like the image of a butterfly landing on old pirate booty.

Tgoette said...

Lovely verse! Great job!

MorningAJ said...

What pretty images. I love the idea of owning some pirate-stolen jewellery!

(Romantic old pirates - not the sort you get these days!)

Linda Jacobs said...

"let the guitar play you" is so unexpected that it's perfect! I really like this!

Mary said...

Beautifully composed!

Isabel said...

wonderful!

mindlovemisery said...

I love the vibrancy of the poem and the rhythm, it was very sensory

Amanda said...

Cudos! Not only it's beautiful, it managed to combine so many prompts. *envy* :)

Linc said...

Very nice, very vivid!

Jangle said...

Jingle: No wonder you find this stunning. I was stunned just to see a "Jingle" commenting on this jingle.

lunawitch15 said...

so vivid and striking images here . i thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

cj Schlottman said...

What beautiful images you create with this lovely post!

Namaste..........cj

Jenny said...

What beautiful and ethereal imagery you painted here.

This writing was like a spell.

Really compelling and lovely.