are at home
I jingle silvers chains that hold them
sheen of green peeps through blue
when a butterfly flutters nearby
I let it sit on my bracelet
an antique, one of the legacy of heroes maybe
those heroes who were really sea pirates
"let the guitar play you"
24 comments:
enjoyed all the imagery here,
blue turquoise, silver chains, butterfly flutters.
Lovely
Beautiful use of imagery!
A very interesting take on the prompt!
Colorful images here.
=)
Gautami...
I Love turqoise.
I Loved your 55.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Sunday...G
stunning.
So very interesting and unexpected ;-) Peace and blessings
Thanks so much for coming by my site. I see you ahve a poetry site and I would like to invite you to visit my site www.poetrytalkingtotrees.blogspot.com. It is more of a creative writing site, I dabble in it all.
Anyway - back to you:
THis is such a fun post, loved the imagery, the sounds, the colours, the feelings, the visions - everything that it brought up was very vivid. Lovely work.
A novel and lovely vision, chock full of beautiful textures...very enjoyable...excellent job !
love all the images!
I like the image of a butterfly landing on old pirate booty.
Lovely verse! Great job!
What pretty images. I love the idea of owning some pirate-stolen jewellery!
(Romantic old pirates - not the sort you get these days!)
"let the guitar play you" is so unexpected that it's perfect! I really like this!
Beautifully composed!
wonderful!
I love the vibrancy of the poem and the rhythm, it was very sensory
Cudos! Not only it's beautiful, it managed to combine so many prompts. *envy* :)
Very nice, very vivid!
Jingle: No wonder you find this stunning. I was stunned just to see a "Jingle" commenting on this jingle.
so vivid and striking images here . i thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
What beautiful images you create with this lovely post!
Namaste..........cj
What beautiful and ethereal imagery you painted here.
This writing was like a spell.
Really compelling and lovely.
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